Feedback on pitch

Feedback on Pitch

From the feedback on pitch we found out what we have to improve to make our film better.

·       Clarify the genre – in the pitch the genre of the film was unclear to the audience, we had to improve it and make sure the audience know it’s an action film

·       Make the fight scenes more convincing – we improved the mise en scene by adding fake make up, therefore the fight scenes were more convincing as they looked more realistic

·       Clarify the use of lighting – we didn’t mention what lighting we’ll use therefore we had to improve it

We also found out what’s good so far

·       Good use of equilibrium model – the equilibrium, disruption and new equilibrium was clear for the audience.

·       Good use of location – we used appropriate locations for the action films

Good variety of shot angles – we used many shots such as low angle to show power, high angle to show vulnerability, close up, medium shots, medium close ups, long shots and establishing shots.